Developmental editing

What is developmental editing?

This form of editing examines the overall workings of your manuscript – the building blocks of the story. It reviews aspects such as:

  • Key plot points
  • Story structure
  • Voice
  • Character development

What is the process?

  • You send me your full manuscript
  • I leave in-line comments where appropriate to highlight any of the developmental aspects mentioned above
    • I will also note what I feel works well to help you identify the strengths in your story
  • The comments will include suggestions for improvement where possible
  • After finishing the manuscript, I will write a detailed report that covers all the developmental elements. This will identify what works well in the manuscript and what could be improved
  • The report will also include a chapter breakdown, character list and basic style guide to help you in later stages of editing your manuscript

How much does it cost?

Developmental editing costs £15 per 1,000 words. To book your slot, a 50% non-refundable deposit is required.


My editing always comes from a place of honesty and encouragement. My aim is to help writers get their books to the best they can be.